"Eyewitness" Published Short


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"Eyewitness" Published Short


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- Writer: Christopher Korkos
- Artist: Scott Morse

Written & Drawn

July 2024 - to be published in 2025

Project Overview

I wrote "Eyewitness" as part of Scott Morse's This Ink Runs Cold comic anthology, created in memory of the late Allen Spiegel. My submission included a one-page story and notes on the proposed comic. I met with Scott at the 2024 San Diego Comic Con to watch him translate it to a five-panel comic.

Scott Morse is a veteran of comics and art direction, having worked at Pixar, Nickelodeon, Cartoon Network, and Universal Pictures. He has also published more than 20 acclaimed graphic novels over his career. I was proud to see my story come to life through his incredible talent and experience.


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Eyewitness

By Christopher Korkos

The stranger’s head hung to his chin. Sleep had gathered around his eyes and mouth, and the ice in his half-finished bourbon had long melted to join with the darker liquid. His armchair sagged in the middle, straining to retain its aged structure. The right half of his face flickered softly in the invasive light of billboards. Such was his deceit that, were Brooks to raise a thumb and hide the crusted wound in the center of the man’s chest, she might have thought him asleep.

Brooks was the first to approach the body. Forensics was still on its way, and her "partner" had hurriedly stepped outside for a smoke. She raised her left arm to the stranger’s head, feeling her wrist thrum as its intricately laced wiring connected with his backup.

Isaac Ember. Male, 68. Citizen of the Dominion.

Before digitized memory, police would cobble together stories behind each crime – groping in the dark for answers, surrendering to fragile human bias. They would create explanations where none could be found, tie pretty bows on unfinished work. But then came the Dominion, and with it, absolute efficiency.

Brooks knelt at the center of the cramped tenement, laying down a flat steel disk and hovering a hand just above its lambent center. The cipher flashed blue, then green as it synced with the two and a half petabytes now compressed into one of the spare drives in Brooks’ arm.

Is that all we are, in the end?

She pushed aside the thought, resolving to drown it in her usual vices. She had an interview to run. Brooks tapped the cipher’s green center, and the image of a man coalesced above it. His hardlight frame was hollow, as though made from bent wires, but his identity was unmistakable.

“Time to wake up.”

Isaac opened his eyes.


Eyewitness - Panel Notes

PANEL 1
  • Visual: “The stranger’s head hung to his chin…” – show victim’s face, but hide his killing wound
  • Text: “He could be asleep…”
PANEL 4
  • Visual: “Brooks was the first to approach the body…” – show partner outside and Brooks holding her arm to the man’s head
  • Text over Brooks: “Before digitized memory, this was all guesswork and bias. But with the Dominion came absolute efficiency.”
  • Text over Isaac: “Isaac Ember. Male, 68. Citizen of the Dominion.”
PANELS 2+3
  • Visual: Same view as before, but pulled back to show the full scene, including victim’s bullet wound and Brooks observing
  • Text: “…if it weren’t for the hole in his chest.”
PANEL 5
  • Visual: “Brooks knelt at the center of the cramped tenement…” – show Brooks holding her arm to the cipher, and show the device lighting up
  • Top Text: “Two-point-five petabytes of data…”
  • Bottom Text: “…is that all we are, in the end?”
PANEL 3
  • Combine with Panel 2 above
PANEL 6
  • Visual: “Isaac opened his eyes.” – draw a visual parallel to the first panel, but now with the digital recreation of Isaac opening his eyes
  • Top Dialogue: “Oh well.”
  • Bottom Dialogue: “Time to wake up, Isaac.”